Share Your Favorite Poem

Mark on October 13th, 2008

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Do you have a favorite poem?

Last night I read poetry with a friend over dinner. We picked a few books off my shelf: Dorothy Parker, Rumi, and love poems by Pablo Neruda (who was portrayed in the wonderful movie Il Postino.)

One particular poem by Neruda made us laugh out loud:

My ugly love, you’re a messy chestnut.
My beauty, you are pretty as the wind.
Ugly: your mouth is big enough for two mouths.
Beauty: your kisses are fresh as new melons.

Ugly: where did you hide your breasts?
They’re meager, two little scoops of wheat.
I’d much rather see two moons across your chest,
two huge proud towers.

Ugly: not even the sea contains things like your toenails.
Beauty: flower by flower, star by star, wave by wave,
Love, I’ve made an inventory of your body:

My ugly one, I love you for your waist of gold;
my beauty, for the wrinkle on your forehead.
My Love: I love you for your clarity, your dark.

Isn’t that a gem?

So what’s your favorite poem? If you have one, be sure to share it with us in the comments section (or even better - write an original!) And if you need some creative inspiration, I highly recommend attending a poetry slam in your city or town! Or visit Poetry.org. Leave a comment!

13 Responses to “Share Your Favorite Poem”

  1. God blooms from the shoulder of the elephant who becomes courteous to the ant. —Haifz

  2. I have MANY favorites….here is just one…keep in mind I’ve had about as much luck in love as dear Sylvia herself!!!

    Never Try to Trick Me with a Kiss

    Never try to trick me with a kiss
    Pretending that the birds are here to stay;
    The dying man will scoff and scorn at this.

    A stone can masquerade where no heart is
    And virgins rise where lustful Venus lay:
    Never try to trick me with a kiss.

    Our noble doctor claims the pain is his,
    While stricken patients let him have his say;
    The dying man will scoff and scorn at this.

    Each virile bachelor dreads paralysis,
    The old maid in the gable cries all day:
    Never try to trick me with a kiss.

    The suave eternal serpents promise bliss
    To mortal children longing to be gay;
    The dying man will scoff and scorn at this.

    Sooner or later something goes amiss;
    The singing birds pack up and fly away;
    So never try to trick me with a kiss:
    The dying man will scoff and scorn at this.

    Sylvia Plath

  3. JABBERWOCKY
    Lewis Carroll
    (from Through the Looking-Glass and What Alice Found There, 1872)
    `Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
    Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
    All mimsy were the borogoves,
    And the mome raths outgrabe.

    “Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
    The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
    Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
    The frumious Bandersnatch!”

    He took his vorpal sword in hand:
    Long time the manxome foe he sought –
    So rested he by the Tumtum tree,
    And stood awhile in thought.

    And, as in uffish thought he stood,
    The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
    Came whiffling through the tulgey wood,
    And burbled as it came!

    One, two! One, two! And through and through
    The vorpal blade went snicker-snack!
    He left it dead, and with its head
    He went galumphing back.

    “And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
    Come to my arms, my beamish boy!
    O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!’
    He chortled in his joy.

    `Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
    Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
    All mimsy were the borogoves,
    And the mome raths outgrabe.

  4. Ok, Here is one of mine

    Amazing Love
    By
    Laurie Henry

    Amazing love was sung today as people praised your name
    But how amazing is this love I heard in the refrain?
    In the presence of the angry crowd did you think of me?
    As they accused you falsely, yet did not set you free?

    My dear child I faced the mob but I remained in silence
    Accusations flung with hate unleashing hearts of violence
    “This man’s a god? That can’t be, why that’s blasphemy”
    They yelled “Crucify him! Kill him now! Hang him from a tree!”

    Their words like arrows sharp, pierced my heart but yet
    I did this for a special purpose I never would regret.
    For through this act it was your heart I yearned for to pursue
    As I stood before the crowd, of course I thought of you.

    Amazing love was sung today as people praised your name
    But how amazing is this love I heard in the refrain?
    With shackled hands you were beaten, spit on, whipped and scourged,
    During all this torture, did somehow thoughts of me emerge?

    Dear child of mine my hands were shackled but certainly not my heart
    For I have been in love with you, long before your start.
    Every burning lash absorbed by great love from me to you
    My love is everlasting; no scourge could cut right through.

    That cross I carried up the hill, a burden that I chose
    Was not for me but for your sins to be permanently disposed
    Tripping up the hill my pain in no way could eclipse
    My love for you, for my child, your name was on my lips.

    Amazing love was sung today as people praised your name
    But how amazing is this love I heard in the refrain?
    Nails pierced your hands, a crown of thorns they ripped across your brow
    In this scene, you thought of me? My God, I don’t see how!

    Oh dear child my thoughts of you were all that got me through
    With each pounding hammer of the nail my love for you just grew.
    They raised me up to hang and die in total agony
    But in my death I rose again so you could be set free.

    Did I think of you up on that cross? Please don’t believe the lies.
    I saw your face between my tears. How beautiful your eyes!
    I died for you because my dear, I ache for you inside
    I love you with all I AM and want you for my bride.

    Amazing love was sung today as people praised your name
    But how amazing is this love I never could explain.
    Your love is so amazing that you would die for me.
    Now your bride, I will be, your love has set me free.
    Thank you Jesus you set me free!

  5. The Times They Are A-Changin’

    Come gather ’round people
    Wherever you roam
    And admit that the waters
    Around you have grown
    And accept it that soon
    You’ll be drenched to the bone.
    If your time to you
    Is worth savin’
    Then you better start swimmin’
    Or you’ll sink like a stone
    For the times they are a-changin’.

    Come writers and critics
    Who prophesize with your pen
    And keep your eyes wide
    The chance won’t come again
    And don’t speak too soon
    For the wheel’s still in spin
    And there’s no tellin’ who
    That it’s namin’.
    For the loser now
    Will be later to win
    For the times they are a-changin’.

    Come senators, congressmen
    Please heed the call
    Don’t stand in the doorway
    Don’t block up the hall
    For he that gets hurt
    Will be he who has stalled
    There’s a battle outside
    And it is ragin’.
    It’ll soon shake your windows
    And rattle your walls
    For the times they are a-changin’.

    Come mothers and fathers
    Throughout the land
    And don’t criticize
    What you can’t understand
    Your sons and your daughters
    Are beyond your command
    Your old road is
    Rapidly agin’.
    Please get out of the new one
    If you can’t lend your hand
    For the times they are a-changin’.

    The line it is drawn
    The curse it is cast
    The slow one now
    Will later be fast
    As the present now
    Will later be past
    The order is
    Rapidly fadin’.
    And the first one now
    Will later be last
    For the times they are a-changin’.

    Bob Dylan

  6. Else - Nice! I like that!

    D’Arcy - Good one! If you like Sylvia you’ll looove Dorothy Parker.

    Laurie - love the Jabberwocky! Love the cadence and the made-up words. Thanks for sharing your personal poem - it’s really impressive. You’ve done this poetry thing before I see! Thank you…

    Lisa - Classic - I’ve heard of this Bob Dylan person, he’s quite good. ;)

    Thanks for taking the time to write these out, everyone!

  7. As Noah oft said to his wife as he sat down to dine.
    I do not care where the water goes as long as it stays out of the wine.

    ..this is my dad’s grace. Yes, my family is strange.

    Wiggle to the laundromat
    Waggle to the sea
    Skip to Casa Loma but you can’t catch me.

    Actually anything by Denis Lee for that matter.

    And anything by Shel Silverstein. In particular the Bagpipe Who Didn’t Say No which is about a turtle who falls in love with a bagpipe that washes up on the beach.

    Okay, definitely children’s poetry. I admit it. Adult poetry bores me to tears.

  8. If you get what you want
    In your struggle for self
    And the world makes you King for a day
    Just go to the mirror
    And look at yourself
    And see what that man has to say.
    For it isn’t your Father or Mother or friends
    Whom upon you their judgement will pass
    The fellow who’s verdict counts most in your life
    Is the one staring back from the glass.
    He’s the person to please
    Nevermind all the rest
    For he’s with you right up to the end.
    And you’ve passed the most difficult, dangerous test
    If the man in the glass is your friend.
    You may fool the world down the pathway of years
    And get pats on the back as you pass
    But your final reward may be heartache or tears
    If you’ve cheated the man in the glass.

  9. Urban - Thanks for the Shel Silverstein reminder!

    Ann - That is amazing. Truly words to live by. But who wrote it??

  10. Thanks for this. It triggered one of my all time adolescent favorites?Note I did say adolescent. :-)

    You love yourself
    you think your grand
    you go to the movies
    you hold your hand
    you put your arm
    around your waist
    and when you get fresh
    you slap your face.

    Annon.
    :-)

  11. For the profound impact it’s had on my life, I have to give credit to “The Journey” by Mary Oliver:

    One day you finally knew
    what you had to do, and began,
    though the voices around you
    kept shouting
    their bad advice–
    though the whole house
    began to tremble
    and you felt the old tug
    at your ankles.
    “Mend my life!”
    each voice cried.
    But you didn’t stop.
    You knew what you had to do,
    though the wind pried
    with its stiff fingers
    at the very foundations,
    though their melancholy
    was terrible.
    It was already late
    enough, and a wild night,
    and the road full of fallen
    branches and stones.
    But little by little,
    as you left their voices behind,
    the stars began to burn
    through the sheets of clouds,
    and there was a new voice
    which you slowly
    recognized as your own,
    that kept you company
    as you strode deeper and deeper
    into the world,
    determined to do
    the only thing you could do–
    determined to save
    the only life you could save.

  12. Mark–the poem was taught to me in the 6th grade and I never forgot it. Mrs. Maroni was my teacher at the time and she was tough. I was her artist-in-residence as she used to like to call me and this poem was written anonymously. I still love it. I also loved an old poem by the title of what I thought was ‘David’ but when I looked it up online it was different. Story of two young brothers climbing a mt and one fell and was hurt so badly he begged his brother to push him over the edge of the cliff…a real heart-stopper as to what the little brother decided to do in the end. I learned that one in high school I think. Glad you liked it.

  13. Bananas

    Bananas are fun Banans are great
    if you eat to many you will get a tummy ache.
    Bananas are fun
    Bananas give you fight
    Eat a Banana to day to spice up your life.
    When I eat bananas I throw the peel on the street
    Then I watch the fun as people fall from their feet.

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